You presentation is really clean and uncluttered - it looks really nice when you lay out all the slides next to each other. One thing I noticed, however, were your title banners - did you intentionally leave them in the two varying lengths?
Natalie, I think the colors and background you used for the slides worked well. It seemed to fit in with the design of the book. I also thought that the problem/solution example was interesting and enjoyable. It gave a good idea of what the book was about. Some of the text seemed a little lengthy for reading at a distance, though the writing did seem focused. Mixing in a few more pictures from the book might help.
Hey Everyone! My name is Natalie Olbrantz and I am a graphic design student at the University of Minnesota-Twin Cities. This is my blog for Graphic Design II where I will be posting a journal of my thoughts, creative processes, and design work from this course throughout the semester!
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You presentation is really clean and uncluttered - it looks really nice when you lay out all the slides next to each other. One thing I noticed, however, were your title banners - did you intentionally leave them in the two varying lengths?
Natalie, I think the colors and background you used for the slides worked well. It seemed to fit in with the design of the book. I also thought that the problem/solution example was interesting and enjoyable. It gave a good idea of what the book was about. Some of the text seemed a little lengthy for reading at a distance, though the writing did seem focused. Mixing in a few more pictures from the book might help.
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